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10 December 2009 @ 07:55 am
Your Last Chance alternate ending 2.  

Alternate Ending 2

Ronnie and Craig stare at me sternly, impatiently waiting for my answer. “Me and Ronnie just have something…different. Just something I can’t let go of.” I try to explain shrugging. My heart leaps in to my throat and I swallow apprehensively as Craig wipes at his bloodshot eyes, “You understand right?” I ask with pleading eyes.

He clears his throat and nods, “Yeah…it’s fine. We’re just friends.” The corners of Ronnie’s mouth turn in to a grin and he wraps his tattooed arms around my waist, “It’s good to have you back,” he whispers in to my hair and then places a kiss on my forehead.

“I’m gonna go.” Craig murmurs, averting his gaze and walking over to the door.
“I’ll see you Thursday at the Epitaph meeting.” I reply before he turns and walks out, letting the door close behind him.

I turn to Ronnie and sigh; he walks toward me and pulls me closer.
“This is your last chance Mr. Radke.” I tease looking up in to his sparkling brown eyes.
“I won’t mess up this time. I promise,” he mumbles before placing his lips to mine.

Yes, I realize how much of a dissapointment this fic was. I apologize immensely. But to make up for it, I've got three more Ronnie/Max's in the works. I promise they're something worth looking forward to. =]
 
 
Place: my room
Feeling: sicksick
Noise: UFC Unleashed
 
 
 
jazzykilluhjazzykilluh on December 10th, 2009 01:21 am (UTC)
FC!
Yes, I lvoe yoru stories.
Can't wait for more.
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 10th, 2009 02:13 am (UTC)
Thanks =] are you reading my other fic Abandoned Hopes?
jazzykilluhjazzykilluh on December 18th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
of course.
xxmz_radkexxxxmz_radkexx on December 10th, 2009 11:11 am (UTC)
FINALLY!!!!
Aww it wasn't a dissappointment, the ending could've been better, but it worked, it could've been alot worse :)

And I loved reading it anyways
oxylove_xx: cookie monsteroxylove_xx on December 10th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
First, thank you for the honesty. It's refreshing and helpful when people tell me something could've been better. It makes my writing better. =]

Also another reason it sucked was because I just had so much going on at the time, and unfortunately I had to force the endings out of me.

I promise everything I write in the future will be a lot better than this. I am ashamed of this ending. =[
xxmz_radkexxxxmz_radkexx on December 11th, 2009 12:14 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Aww no don't be ashamed of it! Iit helps your writing improve :)

Its okay, id rather be honest with people. I hate liars. And if you had heaps going on, that's totally understandable. I hope everythings alright now :)
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 11th, 2009 12:34 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Thanks =] at the time of writing this, I had motha f**kin Swine Flu. I just got over it. Thank god, it was killing me lol.

Ohh and I'm working on a Jacky/Ronnie oneshot too. xD
xxmz_radkexxxxmz_radkexx on December 11th, 2009 12:38 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
SWINE FLU!!!! :O at least you didn't literally die!! It was pretty bad in america, hey? Hardly anyone had it bad over here

Yayayaya Ronnie/Jacky!!! Can't wait to read that one! =D

oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 11th, 2009 01:03 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Haha, yeah I had it for almost three weeks. I still have some of the symptoms. I felt like I had the plague; it was terrible O.o. Where are you from?

& yup Ronnie/Jacky =D I'm actually about to start typing it. And I was gonna do a oneshot but now I'm considering a three-shot.
xxmz_radkexxxxmz_radkexx on December 11th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Aww that sucks! =( Lol I'm from Australia :D

Yes, do a three-shot so I have more to read lol
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 11th, 2009 03:44 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Ooo, always wanted to visit there. How is it?

& Yes three-shot it is. =] I'm gonna start working on the first part tonight. Hopefully it'll be posted either tonight or tomorrow.


Either way, any ideas for it?
xxmz_radkexxxxmz_radkexx on December 11th, 2009 03:51 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Haha soo many people ask what its like & stuff.... uhm hot? Its summer now.... Idk I met someone from america & they said aussies seemed more relaxed :]

Oohhh hmm.... what were u thinking of for the plot?
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 11th, 2009 04:15 am (UTC)
Re: FINALLY!!!!
Ohh, cool. It's Winter here and I'm freezingggg. It's 23 degrees here, burr.

& I didn't have much in mind at all actually. I don't usually plan out much. But I was thinking about doing a songfic three-shot hah xD.
winteralesha on December 10th, 2009 05:10 pm (UTC)
YESSSSSS, finally, the other ending! I've been waiting impatiently all the time.

Aaaargh, now I can't decide which ending I like better. xD I have this huuuuge Ronnie/Max bias and tbqh I'm a bit allergic to Craig at times but Ronnie could be such a jerk in this fic (except for the other ending, his reaction was unexpectedly calm and sweet) whereas Craig was like insanely cute and I didn't want his heart broken, so maybe I'd have to say Craig/Max?

Oh, wait wait! xD What about a threesome? *__*

Anyway, I loved this story from the very beginning to the end(s). You are an amazing writer! Omg, three more Ronnie/Max?! LOVELOVELOVE :D
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 10th, 2009 10:16 pm (UTC)
Haha, sorry for the wait. A threesome would've been nice xD, maybe next fic.

Thanks for reading and commenting. It always puts a smile on my face to get comments like these.

I hope you like all the new stuff I'm writing. Expect original plots, a more developed writing style, and some new pairings. =D
winteralesha on December 11th, 2009 01:11 am (UTC)
Omg, yes!!! Threesome, write it, please! *__* (Does... begging help? *wiggles eyebrows* Lol )

I'll read it for sure and let you know. ^^
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 11th, 2009 01:22 am (UTC)
Threesome, hmm...Ronnie, Max and Craig...

I LIKE IT !! I shall write it xD hah.
love_is_dead483 on December 12th, 2009 03:16 am (UTC)
Yay yay yay yay yay(:
I loved this story(:
I'm not gonna lie, tis very cute:D
<3
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 12th, 2009 04:44 am (UTC)
Aww thank you =] Have you read my other fic Abandoned Hopes? It's a Ronnie/Max.