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23 December 2009 @ 12:58 pm
The Chemicals Between Us Chappy 3  

 

All It Takes For Your Dreams To Come True

I smile, feeling his lips against the supple skin of my neck. His teeth graze my flesh and I gasp. He smiles against my skin and looks up at me, his brown eyes sparkling in the sunlight. “You’re beautiful,” I mumble, admiring his perfection. He places a soft kiss to my lips before pulling away, “I love you Jacky.” He confesses, his smile faltering for just a moment.

I swallow hard and avert my gaze, “I think I love you too.” I reply honestly. The corners of his lips turn in to a smile and he kisses me again, this time tracing his tongue along my bottom lip. I part my lips yearningly, and he slides his tongue along the roof of my mouth, causing me to emit a low moan.

He slides his hand up my shirt, trailing his lithe fingers along my chest. I tremble under his touch and he smirks, “I want you.” He whispers in my ear and sucks on my ear lobe. I shiver and let out a nervous laugh.


“You wanna do this right now?” I ask apprehensively.
“Do what? What the fuck are you talking about man?” I furrow my brow and my eyes snap open. What the fuck? Nasty stares at me intently, completely bemused. “Are you alright dude?” He inquires looking at me fixedly.
My eyes widen as I realize what has just happened. I just had a dream about Ronnie. Eww. I blink incredulously and shake my head, trying to get the disturbing thoughts out of my head. “You sure you’re alright bro?” Nasty persists narrowing his eyes and quirking an eyebrow at me.

I swallow hard and let out a nervous laugh, “Yeah, I’m fine. I just uhh…I had a strange dream.” I admit scratching at my messy hair.
“Whatever you say dude.” He replies rolling his eyes and walking away. I sigh and stretch as I get out of my bunk. I shuffle out to the front of the bus, where I curl up on the couch and turn on the TV. I let my head fall back against the wall and yawn, thank God today’s our day off. I’m way too tired to play a show today. “Hey Ronnie and I are gonna grab some breakfast. You wanna come?” Nasty asks walking in to the front of the bus.

I consider this for a moment. Though I hate being around Ronnie and try to avoid him at all costs; I’m starving and Ronnie’s been sticking to his promise. He’s been completely ignoring me. “Sure,” I agree standing from the couch and walking back to my bunk. I grab a pair of jeans and a t-shirt and take them in to the bathroom with me. I sigh when I hear a knock at the door. “I’ll be out in a minute!” I yell in response.
“Well can your hurry the fuck up. I gotta piss!” Comes Ronnie’s voice. I button and zip my pants before opening the door and stepping out. Ronnie shoots me a dirty look and steps in to the bathroom, slamming the door in my face.

“Jerk,” I mumble making my way outside the bus.
“Need a cigarette?” I look up to see Nasty leaning against the bus, smoking his own Newport.
I nod and take it gratefully. I light the cigarette and inhale, the smoke settling inside my awaiting lungs. “Thanks.” I mutter flashing him a smile.
“No problem. So I take it you and Ronnie are still not getting along too well?” He inquires laughing softly and flicking some ash from his cigarette. I scoff at the thought of us ever getting along, “He’s just an asshole.” I state matter of factly.
“Yeah well, I think he likes you.” He replies wiggling his eyebrows.
I scowl at him as thoughts of the unpleasant dream I had, comes back to me. “That’s gross!” I protest narrowing my eyes and grimacing.
“You know what? I bet if you got to know him, you’d love him.”
I roll my eyes and take another drag of my cigarette, “I don’t see how anyone could love him.” I say harshly.
“Just try Jacky, please. For me.” He insists with pleading eyes.
I exhale deeply and ground my teeth, “Fine, but only for you.”
Ooo, wonder what's gonna happen. It'll happen sooner if I get comments, hah xD

 
 
Place: my room
Feeling: contentcontent
Noise: Knives and Pens - Black Veil Brides
 
 
 
winteralesha on December 23rd, 2009 11:31 am (UTC)
Yes, yes, comments ^^

I'd love you just for the title of this chapter (OMG ASD :D ) but the whole thing is amazing, so that adds up. <3

Usually I only comment the last chapter of a story so... 0=) (Yeah, I suck -.-)

Anyway, you're awesome :D
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 24th, 2009 02:37 am (UTC)
Aww thank you <33
And yes, ASD = massive amounts of <3
more to come soon. =]
falseyoureyes on December 23rd, 2009 04:42 pm (UTC)
Hi. I've been lurking a bit on your journal (very ninja like) and observing from afar your story (again, very ninja). I have to say kudos to you for it because its not a typical ETF slash. Its actually more like FIR slash and I love it all the more for that. I didn't read your last story for personal reasons (if you lurk the recent stuff on STF you'd get an idea why I guess) but I couldn't resist this one beause I loooooooove Jacky in a totally non-sexual way.

Well...I think that's a bit TMI for you. My apologies. but I do like the story. The only real critique I have is the formatting but I dunno if that's you personally or LJ (which has been causing issues).

Okay. Now that I've left a two paragraph essay in your comments, I'll stop. <3
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 24th, 2009 02:32 am (UTC)
Hah. I loved reading this comment, it made me laugh. xD
FIR slash is much needed. <33

Ohh & what exactly is wrong with the layout? =/ It might be my fault cause I copy the chapter from my Mibba and just paste it here. =[

But anyway, hope you enjoy the rest of the story and thankies. =D
falseyoureyes on December 24th, 2009 02:54 am (UTC)
xD Well at least it was good for a giggle. :D
FiR slash is in sever lack. Its good to see something like this. :D

Its mostly spacing, the way the paragraphs are laid out. It might just be LJ, LJ sucks like that sometimes.

:) I hope I will.
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 24th, 2009 04:11 am (UTC)
Ohh. Damn you LJ hah. I'll try and space them out a little more the next time I post. =]
(Anonymous) on December 23rd, 2009 06:23 pm (UTC)
oh lala! XD jacky's shell is begining to crack! And i love it! :D
Great job and i love all your stories btw! Please update soon! ;D
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 24th, 2009 01:17 am (UTC)
hah thanks =]
working on some more now. <3
milliedarko on December 24th, 2009 03:14 am (UTC)
I love you!!!! This was the best early Christmas present ever <3
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 24th, 2009 04:12 am (UTC)
Aww.
Love you moreee <33
Working on some more now. =]
(Anonymous) on December 24th, 2009 06:15 am (UTC)
okayokay.
No, fair!! It's sooo short. ): BUT I LOVE IT. omggggg. Pleasepleasepleaseee, continue like now. :D hehe, having wet, dreams about Ronnie, huh? lmfaoo.
oxylove_xxoxylove_xx on December 24th, 2009 07:51 am (UTC)
Re: okayokay.
Thank you lovely =]
More very soon, promise.
& it'll be longer.
gavininshowersgavininshowers on February 3rd, 2010 06:22 am (UTC)
I think I love you.
XD you're definitely my favourite ETF slash-writer.

Also your icon, I love Kurt.
omnomnom